Monday, February 18, 2019

Reptile park

The Reptile Park
WALT: Write a setting description, describing our senses

  At the Reptile Park, you can see all types of animals, from the smallest baby geckos to massive iguanas and alligators.  When you walk in, you can see turtles roaming around the grass. These small creatures with hard brown and greyish coloured shells move painfully slow.  Their small heads and four limbs poke out of their shells. Some turtles are pigs for not letting other turtles eat the grass. I could feel the light breeze coming towards me, it brushed against my skin, feeling refreshing.  I looked through a staff window, and I could see the owner munching on his sandwich like a dog. Down the hill lots of lizards scatter all over the place. They make a hissing sound that is slightly entertaining. Lying on the ground, you can see chewed up grass.  Since there was a beach next door, I could hear big waves crashing and breaking on the sand. The path to the tarantulas is slanted. The tarantulas are black and yellow with eight creepy crawly legs.  Outside of the Reptile park, you can hear people screaming and running away from the waves, like little babies being separated from their mothers.

You can hear the cars backing up on the gravel like a person scrunching a piece of paper. The atmosphere was really hot because of the scorching sun, the fluffy clouds were slowly fading away. The Reptile park was the best experience of my life, seeing all of the reptiles.   




3 comments:

  1. Well done Rishi! I like the way you used lots of good similes and describing words. I could really imagine this place in my head. Next time you could paragraph your ideas.

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  2. Well done Rishi i like your writing because you used a lot of describing and similes .

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